Never Give Up: How I
Successfully Untrunked a Short Story—and a Giveaway!
A long time ago, so long I’m not sure of exact dates
anymore, I had an idea to explore the background of Romeo and Juliet, using
Cupid as a guide. I’m not sure anymore what inspired this combination; it may
have been a story challenge, or it may have just been a random idea. Either
way, I did the best I could with the story at the time, revising it, posting it
on a writing workshop for feedback, and revising it again. Finally I felt ready
to send it out, under the title of “Antidote for a Family Feud.” My records show
I sent it out four times, getting rejections each time. Eventually I moved on
to other projects and forgot about this story.
Years later, self-publishing became not only much easier
than ever before, but also more desirable in some respects. I decided I would
try this route with one of my works, then decided I liked self-publishing so
much I wanted to do it with more of my stories. Now it was time to peruse the
Folder of Forgotten Stories and decide which ones stood the test of time.
“Antidote for a Family Feud” came to mind. I reread it and revised it again,
then decided to post it to the same writing workshop I’d used years before.
This time, one of the comments gave me a clue as to why the story didn’t work
for that reader; the first-person narrative was too remote and distant. I
thought at first that since I was writing from a god’s perspective, that was
what I wanted. But after mulling it over for a while, I came up with a new way
to use Cupid’s point of view while making it easier for readers to relate to
him. He’d be separated from his wife Psyche, communicating with her only by
letter. This required me to rewrite the story again, as it required a big
change in format. However, now that I had a direction, I made quick progress
with the story. I also found a new title: “Letters to Psyche.” After yet
another round of passing it by my critique partners, I decided it was ready for
the world. I published it first on Amazon, but it’s now available at B&N
and Smashwords
too. It’s received good reviews so far,
so readers must like it.
There are some half-forgotten, half-finished stories of mine
that I may never return to or may never figure out how to make work. But time,
constant effort to improve your craft, and a willingness to take a new approach
to a project can sometimes lead to good results. This is true in many areas of
life, not just writing.
Have any of you found time or a new approach was the key to
making a project successful? Please tell me about it in the comments before
midnight CST. I’ll choose a winner at random for a free eBook of “Letters to
Psyche” in the format of your choice.
And another opportunity to win a prize!
a Rafflecopter giveaway
Sandra Ulbrich Almazan started reading at the age of three
and only stops when absolutely required to. Although she hasn’t been writing
quite that long, she did compose a very simple play in German during middle
school. Her science fiction novella Move
Over Ms. L. (an early version of Lyon’s
Legacy) earned an Honorable Mention in the 2001 UPC Science Fiction Awards,
and her short story “A Reptile at the Reunion ”
was published in the anthology Firestorm
of Dragons. She is a founding member of BroadUniverse and a long-time
member of the Online Writing Workshop for Fantasy, Science Fiction, and Horror.
Her undergraduate degree is in molecular biology/English, and she has a Master
of Technical and Scientific Communication degree. Her current day job is in the
laboratory of an enzyme company; she’s also been a technical writer and a
part-time copyeditor for a local newspaper. Some of her other accomplishments
are losing on Jeopardy! and taking a
stuffed orca to three continents. She lives in the Chicago area with her husband, Eugene; and
son, Alex. In her rare moments of free time, she enjoys crocheting, listening
to classic rock (particularly the Beatles), and watching improv comedy.
When the Greek god Cupid visits Verona, he foresees no problems uniting the
Montague and Capulet families. But when Elisabeth Capulet and Giovanni
Montague's love ends in tragedy, Elisabeth places a powerful curse not on just
the families, but Cupid himself. Unable to visit his wife Psyche, he sends her
letters detailing his efforts to undo the curse. Can the two of them save
another generation of lovers, or will Cupid and Psyche be forever parted?
Twinned Universes:
Paul Harrison always wanted to play
Hamlet, but he never expected he'd live the role first.
In the aftermath of a family tragedy on 21st century Earth, Paul
discovers he's the clone of Sean Lyon, his great-great-grandfather and a famous
TwenCen musician. Suspecting his mother's death was no accident, Paul comes up
with a plan to trick the answers out of the great-uncle who had him cloned. But
in order to make his plan work, Paul needs help from Sean himself-and Sean's
time is running out in the TwenCen universe next door. Although Paul's family
lives on the spaceship that travels between the universes, he's never been
allowed on TwenCen Earth. Now, with the help of his friends, his
disguise-creating holoprojectors, and a quantum quirk, Paul must make his way
to Sean while evading other time travelers who fear he'll change the history of
the TwenCen universe. If Paul is to achieve justice, he must not only risk his
own life, but the wormhole connecting the universes. "To be or not to
be" was a simple question in comparison....
4 comments:
Sometimes a complete rewrite is necessary. I did it with my very first story and it ended up becoming my first published novel.
Congrats, Sandra! And it's amazing how a new perspective can change everything.
I have a few trunk novels I just couldn't get right years ago. Just the other day I had a huge epiphany about one, so we'll see if revising it works.
Thanks, everyone! The random number generator picked 1, so Alex gets a copy of "Letters to Psyche!" I'll e-mail you later to ask about the format you prefer.
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